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Old 17-04-2009, 12:23 AM
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A event that is going to take place.

Instead of writing a story that happened, I would like to write a story that I am planning to happen. A revenge that is going to take place and all the people involved are real in person. I am going to tell u what happened and what leads to the things that I am going to do to them. I am not asking for pts or I am faking all these. What happened to me for the last few days compel me to write this as a venue to vent out my frustration.
“Well, that’s settles everything. We will start the operation once everything is in place. Good job, Dan.” I shook my lawyer hands and got my PA to see him off. Sitting back on my chair, I look out of the window. Thinking, for 3 years I had worked my ass off to make sure I got myself into a position that will enable me to take my revenge on her and that asshole boy friend of hers. I will call her YT and AS for short.
My deep thought was interrupted by a gentle knock on my door. My PA came to inform me that Dan is off and ask me if there were any more instructions for her. I looked at her and grin….she immediately got the idea and walked into the room and locked the door behind her.
“Lin, I want you to crawl to me.” She dropped down on her fours and started to crawl to me as seductively as she can possibly do. Swinging her ass as she crawls, looking at me with her sultry eyes. She made her way under my desk and started to unzip my pants. She started to lick my dick as she was licking a ice cream stick. I didn’t make a mistake hiring her. She has excellent skills at work and off work. As she was enjoying my dick, I reached down to her blouse and started to play with her big boobs, I am always a sucker for boobs. They were soft and big, just like YT. YES, YT the moment I thought of her and all the things she did to me. I roughly pulled Lin up and turn her around. I forcefully pulled her office skirt down and ripped off her black lacy panties. And just enter her in one forceful stroke, she murmured a faint cry as she knows that there are still people working outside.
I grabbed her boobs and started to pump her as hard as I can. Rage started to take over me. I was thinking more n more about YT. This made me felt even madder. I pushed Lin against the window and start to pump her even harder, I grab a handful of her hair and her head was pulled back as much as she can. And all these while, all she can is to restraint herself from crying out loud. One hand on her hair and with the other I was squeezing the life out of her boobs.
I feel that I was coming and in one swift motion, I turn her around and pressed her down. As the feeling is uncontrollable, I shaft my dick covered with her pussy fluid into her mouth and shoot my load down her throat. I pushed her head as deep as she can. She was choking and her eyes filled up with tears. But she still make the effort to start sucking my dick, cleaning it as my dick finished ejaculating my last sperm into her mouth. She clean my dick with her tongue with much detail.
I sat back on my chair and she crawled over to tidy up my pants and help me zip up. She began to tidy herself up, took her ripped panty and stuffed it into her pocket on her jacket. She composed herself and looked at me. I told her that there is nothing else and she can leave, when she was about to leave to room. I called her, “ Lin, I had approved your raise. Check your pay slip next month. You should see a figure that you like.” Her eyes brightens up and said “Thank you so much, Mr. Tan!” I quickly turn into a frown and she immediately replied “ Sorry, I meant Thank you master, I am your slave and your wish is my command”. This reminded her that she was to address me as master when we are alone. I gave her a gesture to get out, she scoots off as fast as she could.
Now, I am thinking what is going to happen when I start my revenge on those two tomorrow. I have everything in place and its time to carry it out……………
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Old 17-04-2009, 02:40 AM
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

What the hell are you writing i dunno.
And one look,i know i am not interested to continue reading...
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Old 17-04-2009, 02:52 AM
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

Bro, its either u are a psycho or u watch too much porn
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Old 17-04-2009, 04:55 AM
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

sorry reverend, you better stick to the seminary, cos your writing skills sucks. Perhaps it will be better if you wrote a normal story in old English eg."Thy Rod is strong. Thou art cometh~!!"
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Old 17-04-2009, 07:13 AM
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

I think your writing is fine. Do learn to use paragraphs as it aids the reading process.
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Old 17-04-2009, 08:28 AM
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

Looks like copied from some erotic stories in the net..
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Old 17-04-2009, 11:31 AM
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

No head no tail,look like cut from somewhere....
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Old 17-04-2009, 01:04 PM
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

What TS trying to write is like a novel. Till now what TS trying to interpret can be understood if bros really take the time and patience to read & digest slowly.

I am sure TS will be able to come out with the rest of the plot soon.

Keep it up TS!

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Old 17-04-2009, 01:14 PM
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

I thought TS has used a different style of starting his story. Not too bad I would say. Do carry on.
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Old 17-04-2009, 03:10 PM
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

sound saddist..but interesting....TS had waited for 3 years and living in anger just to make sure he had his last laugh....just like tawain series....shall camp here...
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Old 17-04-2009, 03:40 PM
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

I have no idea what you are trying to tell or do?? Are you telling us a story that had happen already like the others post or telling us the future that you going to do what....??? You got some good imagination there....
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Old 17-04-2009, 03:45 PM
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

Let me check my understanding...

A lawyer asked to execute some sort of legal plan...

His secretary is a slave for him for money...

His revenge plot against a woman and her BF...

Not forgetting...

His poor use of paragraphing...

His fantasy of being a high ranking position...

His motive of asking for points... LOLz...

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Old 17-04-2009, 06:41 PM
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

TS, you write as though the events already happened when the event is gonig to take place.

Anyhow, give us all a background on what's happening first. Then i think lots of brothers here have ideas on how to make 'her' pay.
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Old 17-04-2009, 06:51 PM
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

camping here..more n more
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Re: A event that is going to take place.

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