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welcome back TS
Gave you my humble 3 points! You are the first person i upped! hehehe |
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Time: Friday night
Venue: Lounge Bar 11.05 pm “Elaine, where are you? Aren’t we supposed to meet at 11 at your house?” I can vaguely make out Phoebe’s voice coming out from Elaine’s phone. “Errrrr sorry Phoebe, something happened. I can’t make it back home. Can you tell the girls to go ahead without me?” “Oei how can you fly aeroplane like that? Raymond has let us into your house, so we wait for you here?” “Oh Raymond is there?” “He let us in and left.He said it’s best to leave us alone to enjoy ourselves for the night. He’s off to his friend’s place for soccer. But he looks solemn. Anything’s wrong between you two?” “Nothing Phoebe. You girls just go ahead and have fun at my place. Make yourselves at home. You know my place well enough. Just get my spare key from the cabinet. You know where it is right?” “Ya of course I know, but where are you and what time are you coming back?” “Most likely I won’t be back for the night.” “What’s happening……” Elaine cuts the line before Phoebe can continue on the other side. After pausing for 2 seconds, Elaine switches off her phone and looks at me, “I don’t know how to tell Phoebe.” “No worries. I understand.” The call has broken the atmosphere and we are both feeling embarrassed by our earlier actions. There is a 3 seconds pause again…. we blurt out at the same time, “I am sorry.” We look at each other and burst out laughing. It is a hearty laugh and it lightens the whole mood. “Elaine, don’t think too much. Let’s just enjoy the nice night view here together ok?” The night view is really beautiful with the waterfront reflecting the flickering lights of the buildings and streets. A cool breeze is blowing onto our face and we can smell the serenity in the air. “Yes Wilson, this is such a nice place and such a beautiful night. Thanks for keeping me company. Let’s enjoy the wine together.” For the next 1 hour, we just chat happily and enjoy the wine. We are getting high from the alcohol and soon we switch to vodka and we continue drinking and enjoying the booze and continue chatting, from anything under the sky. 2.45 am “Sorry sir, we are closing in 15 min time. Do you want to settle the bill?” “Sure. We are leaving now.” 2.55 am We are on a cab together. By now, Elaine is almost totally out. I am about 80% gone too. Luckily she still manages to give the taxi driver her address and give me her unit number before she falls asleep. Elaine is leaning her head onto my shoulder and sound asleep. She seems so peaceful sleeping. Glad to see her so peaceful after the whole ordeal in the night earlier. She is such a beautiful girl. My heart goes out to her. 3.25 am I fumble through her handbag and find her house keys. Elaine is totally gone now and she can barely stand up with me grabbing and supporting her. The house is empty. The girls must have already left. The place is in quite a mess though, with the sofa cushions strewn all over and empty beer cans and liquor bottles lying around on the table and floor. I manage to carry Elaine to her bed and drop her there. A drunk person can be real heavy. I am also almost a goner. My head is spinning and aching real bad, and my chest feels so heavy. I walk out of her room. I don’t think I can make it back home in this state. In the darkness, I manage to get to the next room in the house. Great, there is a bed there. In my drunken stupor, I stumble towards the bed and fall right onto it. And black out…..
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Story 1: The Getaway Story 2: My Happy Life Story 3: The Invitation Story 4: It All Came Crashing Down Last edited by Hardaway1818; 13-08-2013 at 10:43 PM. |
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Its almost impossible to not believe you are a writer by profession haha keep it up man.
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TS after 35 pages and W still no action..its like in another bro story, t character A also no action. Let see who succumb first.
more pls |
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Thumbs up for you bro. Very good story with lots of unexpected twists and turns. Waiting for more bro...
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For nothing camping here kana zapped by bastards.
Some losers just can't stand others writing. Anyway, support ur story still |
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still camping xD
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Time: Friday night / Saturday morning
Venue: Elaine’s house My head is throbbing, as if there are a thousand workers knocking nails onto my cranium. I am still in frenzy from the earlier alcohol indulgence, but I can feel my high tide coming. Alcohol is a form of liquid and it must come out somewhere from the body system. As much as I dread it, somehow I manage to push myself up from the bed. The moment I stand up, the world starts to spin. Somehow, somewhat, I manage to struggle my way out of the pitch dark room. Keep bumping into something along the way, and the pain actually wakes me up slightly from my slumber. I manage to stumble my way to the toilet, switch on the lights and relieve myself. The feeling is so good, all the pent-up tension in the groin area. Feel much more refresh after washing my face with the cold water at the basin. I glance at my watch, it’s only 4.40 am. I start to recollect the events of the night…. Dinner with Jenny….. Meeting with boss Stuart…. Saved Stuart from the approaching George….. Sent Jenny up to hotel room with Mark….. Bumped into Elaine…. Sent for Raymond to Jenny’s room…. Set up Raymond and Jenny….. Elaine heartbroken and drink session…… My memories are starting to come back, and together with it, my urges are also starting to build up. I am supposed to have a night of fun with the sexy Jenny, but I have given it up because of Elaine. The kiss with Elaine brought me up to another high, but was soon suppressed by the alcohol. Now all the pent-up pressure throughout the whole night is coming back to me. I am feeling real horny. I need to relieve myself. My thoughts immediately switch to my dream girl Elaine. She is such a sweet, young girl. If such a good drinker like me is feeling the spin from the alcohol, it must be worse for her. She drank almost the double of me. She must still be dead drunk. I am a bastard to have such thoughts, but the pent up urges throughout the night and the semi-drunk state I am in right now give in to man’s basic instincts. I need to fuck her now. |
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Time: Friday night / Saturday morning
Venue: Elaine’s bedroom 4.45 am It is almost pitch dark in the bedroom. I can vaguely make out the shape of the bed in the room and a shapely body form on the bed. I close the door behind me and walk slowly towards the bed. The moment I close the door, the room becomes pitch dark. When I reach the edge of the bed, I call out lightly, “Elaine, Elaine, you there?”, and give you nudge on her body. No response at all. Good. She is dead drunk. I take off my shirt and pants and everything and climb slowly onto the bed. My mind is already wandering over Elaine’s sexy body and my cock is already saluting at the sleeping body. I slip myself under the blanket and snuggle up against the sleeping body from the back. It feels so shiok when my naked manhood touches the soft fabric of her sexy ass. I sniff at her hair, smell so nice, so sweet, so womanly. I nestle my whole naked body against her whole body. It feels too good. I just hug her in this spoon position and let my whole body connect to every part of her. Suddenly she gives out a little drunken murmur and snuggles back against me, her ass wiggling against my throbbing manhood. Woohoo, she must be feeling frisky as well, even in her drunken sleep. I position my hardened cock along the crevice of her ass through her dress and move it slowly up and down her crevice. I can feel her pushing her hips back against my manhood and rocks slowly in tandem with me. She is as horny as me haha. I cannot stand it anymore. My hand move to cup her breast and give it a good squeeze through her dress. Wow it feels so nice, so soft, so firm. It fills up my whole palm nicely but I had expected her C-cup to be more than a handful for me. Hmmm the power of push-up bra nowadays, I guess. She gives out a soft moan from the caress of her breast by my hand. Her ass is pressed against me even more harder now. I press my face onto the back of her neck and kiss her neck. Her skin smells heavenly. I open my mouth and lick on the back of her neck. Her body is squirming from my tongue teasing. We are in that position for a good 5 minutes, with me just teasing her and enjoying rubbing my cock against her ass, my hand kneading her breast and me kissing, smelling and licking her neck. She turns her body around and we lock ourselves in a sensual kiss. This kiss is different from our earlier kiss in the night at the lounge. This is more sensual, more slowly, more subtle as she is still in a drunk sleepy state. Her mouth reeks of alcohol but it tastes honey to me anyway. My hands reach for the bottom of her dress and pull the whole dress over her. I slip her bra strap off her shoulders and attack her breasts with my mouth. Her skin tastes so sweet. I lick the two soft mounds and suck on the little raisin-sized nipples. My sucking is causing her body to squirm and shiver. I move my tongue down over her body, slowly trailing my tongue on her belly-button, her stomach, her v-shape at her groin area. I skip the most sacred part and move down to her thigh, to her knee and to her calf. I want to savour every inch of this precious body. My heart is pounding furiously now. I am left now with the most sacred area. I move towards the target and my nose first come into contact with the little bush. She does not have a thick bush, just a nice little triangle of hair. My lips close onto the bush and the hair feels so soft, like the fur on a soft toy. I stick my tongue out and give it a good, long lick. My tongue pushes apart her labia and gives her clit a few quick licks. She shudders and her love juices flow out. I lap up the honey religiously. She tastes so delicious. By now, I am beyond control. I need to release at this very instance. I would have wanted to enjoy this young body more but my pent up urges is too great for me to hold it any further. I ease myself up and position my glorious manhood at her sacred hole. In the darkness, I slowly aim my missile head at its target. I can feel my dick head touch her opening. In position. Slowly I push myself in, inch by inch, slowly. Her body would shiver as I go in each inch. The tremble and shiver gets stronger each time with an inch deeper into her hole. Her mouth is murmuring faint but audible sounds of gasps and moans. When the whole length is in, I stay still in that position, savouring the hot and wet vagina walls engulfing the whole of my manhood. I twitch my manhood muscles, feeling the tightness of her pussy. I cannot hold it any longer not to start moving. I move my butt backwards and jerk it forward roughly. That brings out a much louder moan from her. That simply encourages me. I am like an animal possessed now, just humping violently into this hot tight hole. Wow it feels too good. To be making love to such a young, pretty girl. I have not had such a strong sensation ever since my wedding night with Claire. I am too horny now. I couldn’t care less about slow and sensual love-making. I just want to fuck the shit out of her and spew my hot cum into her. Her vagina is feeling so lusciously wet and I keep humping into her. Her body would shiver from time to time and her hips seems to be pushing up to match my rhythm. Sexy moans keep coming out from her mouth, forming a nice music to the rhythmic banging sound of two bodies. It feels so good fucking this young hole. I can feel my climax approaching. I begin to pump faster and harder and deeper. I know I cannot last much longer. Neither can she. Grunts of passion are filling the room. Her legs are wrapped more tightly around my waist. At this moment she moans out a sentence. “Jason I love you. Make me cum.” Jason? Who is Jason? Is Elaine having an affair with this guy called Jason?
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Story 1: The Getaway Story 2: My Happy Life Story 3: The Invitation Story 4: It All Came Crashing Down Last edited by Hardaway1818; 14-08-2013 at 11:50 PM. |
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Mouth watering write up. Need more
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t was very good ,waiting to wake up the next morning for another sequel
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Holy shit! What an exciting update!
Never expected such a twist. Phoebe. Wow. |
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No DNA problem is Phoebe pregnant.
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#525
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Simply awesome!
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