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Re: The longest 4 days of my life.
Good story telling...
I like the storyline alot at first....then less after the scene 'Daryl' made Lynn thought it was him who cummed raw in her pussy when it was her husband (James) Then, the story seemed to become untastefully perverse. Hope there is a twist somehow... But keep it up TS! |
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I felt sick too but I read on as it also got my fullest attention, my respect to him as he wrote exceptionally well!
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Wa liao. Although it is a story, but somehow, the narration was so clear that it somehow is from a live scene!
Really a Thumbs Up to TS! IF it is a real story, wonder if lynn will prefer Daryl? |
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POWER.....camping here for more
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if you don't like, just don't read. if you like, even i don't ask you and you'll read. a person's meat might be an other person's poison.
i like TS's writing. |
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WOW !!!!
One of the best stories I've read in a long time. Reading the part about how Lynn willing allowed Daryl to shag her really got my heart racing. Please continue bro. Up you already.
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Twisted fucking tale for any married husband out there.
Nice writing though! Do write more! Hopefully more fun and "normal" stuffs. |
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Best story!
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Can turn it into a HBO or Showtime mini series! And still keep the same title!
Great job bro TS. Hope to see more stories from you. Even if you cannot publish in Singapore, you are welcome to publish in SBF But just a note ... Unless James & Daryl have similar physics and dicks, am sure Lynn will know it is a diff dick that eners her even in blindfolds. However, the act was twisted and perverse but at the same time captivating and mesmerizing. You do know how to capture the audience and make them wanting more. |
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3 more days of sex for debts to clear.......whats cccuuuuummmmming next?
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Great story....keep going...
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nice nice nice, something new ya, blackmail, threaten then now...submission^^
Cheers, Ron
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Hi TS, can't wait for the ending at the fourth day.....
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I was sitting in a daze, looking at the envelope in hand. There is this great sense of relieve that everything is now over . Lynn and i can finally get on with our lives, we can put all this behind us and move on.
Yet i have this foreboding feel that something is wrong . Running through the thoughts in my head, i roughly figured out what just happened. Daryl must must have dangled a carrot tempting enough if she agreed to go along with him. That is to pretend to enjoy his every advances, he must have also reassured Lynn that i will not be around and that i do not need to be a witness to this . How evil of him to exploit Lynn's innocence and her gullible nature. What evil words have he used to tempt Lynn to take up his offer. I heard footsteps coming downstairs and i looked towards the staircase. It's Daryl. Sitting in the couch opposite me ,Daryl reached for a ashtray in a nearby basket, he seemed really familiar with this place. I wonder how many other woman had fell prey to him at this location. Lighting up a cigarette , Daryl started...... Daryl : James, the IOU is in your hands. You all are free to go after tonight .. No need to wait till sunday evening... On one condition. I couldn't believe my ears as Daryl continued... Daryl : before you say anything ,listen to me . He made a dramatic exhale of smoke before adding . Daryl : here's the thing James, i have a proposition. I will not tell Lynn you have the envelope. The truth is i have never felt so alive in so many years .Lynn is such a nice girl to fuck . Haha. No offence. But she really is . you are a lucky man Daryl : the fact that she is an unwilling participant heighten my senses even more . I think we can achieve something together. Something better, something more wild. I was about to tell Daryl to fuck off when he hit the nail on the head with his observations that he rattled out. Daryl: don't try to give me your high and mighty speech James. I know you .... You like what you saw this couple of days... Don't deny it . Daryl : how many times you pretended to care yet you did not tell Lynn the truth, ? How many times were you quietly stroking yourself in a corner, enjoying the whole show. Another drag of his cigarette. Daryl : i saw the look of sheer satisfaction on your face as you cum inside Lynn pretending to be me. Don't deny it ... I reflected on Daryl's words, guilty on every count. Daryl : i do not doubt your love for Lynn, but think about this. ... Will she ever let you do these acts to her ? Will you ever have access to a bridal studio? . Can you think of any act more perverse than what you've seen this couple of days that arouse you ? Daryl : after this weekend , will your sex life be the same again ? Will you have the same level of satisfaction with Lynn ? Daryl : you of all people should know the answer. Daryl left to let his words sink in. I heard the clicking of heels coming down the steps and i looked up and saw Lynn holding onto her cheongsum around her breast area, she had no help to zip herself up. She did not have access to a towel, her thighs and calves are still wet from her washing in the bathroom. Lynn : hey .... You just got back ? From the corner of my eye , i saw Daryl drinking a glass of water looking at us. James : erm yah . Just got back ...... Are you ok ? Lynn : ermm . Fine ... Let me change out .. Lynn disappeared behind the changing area and Daryl came over and motioned me to follow him upstairs I did not know what i was doing anymore. Settling down near the bed, Daryl continued his brainwash. Daryl : let me tell you what told Lynn. I don't see a need to hide this at this point. You must have figured some parts out, i don't believe you are a stupid man . I dangled her a carrot. I told her i will shorten our deal. Instead of sunday evening, she is free to go as long as she accomplish 2 things. Daryl got up from the bed, walking around the studio. Daryl : she has already done the first, i want her to want me. I want her to look at me in the eyes as i fuck her . I want her to call out my name. Do you know the kind of sick arousal you get from fucking another man's wife ? You don't. ...i do. Daryl : but the thing here is you do enjoy it. You are aroused, you felt turned on and alive seeing you sweet conservative wife doing it with me .... Is that not the truth? I am speechless. I could not think of a better way to describe myself. I am indeed aroused seeing Lynn being taken by Daryl despite my moral objections . Why are men built this way ? Daryl : i don't like to waste time . I really think we can have fun together for this one time before we get out of each other's life . What do you think James ?? ... I knew i am destined for the deepest level of hell when i gave my reply . James : what do i have to do ? Smiling his grotesque smile , Daryl took a deep breath .. Daryl : James you know .... We can do great things together ... Haha .. Listen carefully .... As Daryl gave a brief outline of his plan , i could actually feel my manhood reacting, at the same time i started to regret agreeing to his demands for my participation. What he wanted Lynn to do is physically, and mentally very demanding on her. If she failed, she will be burned out on the sexual front as well. I don't think she will be able to do it , yet deep inside i felt the need to see Lynn attempt this feat . I wanted to see her try…. What’s worst was I wanted to see her fail I could feel my heart racing as I heart Lynn calling out for me downstairs. It’s 5pm…. Daryl has already started making a series of phone calls. |
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