Story: The Invitation - Page 13

Hotspotxxxxx · #**181** 28-06-2013, 08:31 AM

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Originally Posted by baotohk

story becoming so predicting without much twist. TS is losing it........sad to say

-_-lll

Such a good story, still can complain.

Anyway I was the one who just zap you and I am not afraid to admit it.

steventan85 · #**182** 28-06-2013, 08:39 AM

pls continue ur story.dont hang us too long

GeMiNiZzzzZzz · #**183** 28-06-2013, 08:46 AM

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Originally Posted by baotohk

story becoming so predicting without much twist. TS is losing it........sad to say

Why not you try to write one and let others comment

FapFlapFap · #**184** 28-06-2013, 10:16 AM

Please continue soon! Great story you have

coolcam · #**185** 28-06-2013, 10:18 AM

Great Job Bro... You can really feel both the pain and excitement in the lead character...

Keep up the great work!~

Maybe once you have enough story you can publish a book!

craves · #**186** 28-06-2013, 12:59 PM

Bro Baotohk,

there is a bit of familiarity, but i think many (or most) of us love it all the same. This is way way better than Media Corp 8 where the scripts are far far less ingenious.

Way to go Bro Hardaway, cannot wait to read your next installment... please keep our spirits hiGH!

Cheers

Xazz · #**187** 28-06-2013, 10:11 PM

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Originally Posted by baotohk

story becoming so predicting without much twist. TS is losing it........sad to say

can you tell me how you will predict the next part? let's see if you are correct.

alphonsus · #**188** 28-06-2013, 11:43 PM

TS,

Hope you will put in double effort to write the part on Jenny.

Proof to the naysayers you still have what it takes

sstam · #**189** 29-06-2013, 12:13 AM

More and more interesting... looking forward to see what's next...

youngboy123 · #**190** 29-06-2013, 03:36 AM

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Originally Posted by Red_Wine

I thinked after Jenny, Wilson will send the green envelope to Raymond's wife.

I don't know why I laughed at this comment but same exact thinking.. Probably because I felt bad for Wilson's wife and wanted Raymond to have a taste of what it feels like to have his own wife fucked by another man...