The Day you walked away - Page 14

snooker · #**196** 31-12-2012, 02:55 AM

been following this story since the start...I must say that this a good piece of work

Coffeecans · #**197** 31-12-2012, 05:00 PM

Sitting right in the middle surrounded by his lovers wasn't really the best feel. All he could hear was his own heavy breathing through his ears. Gin didn't expect this but she walked quietly to Daniel and hugged him from behind as she whispered to him that she would stay by his side irregardless of what happens.

But strangely the scene was not filled with any quarrels. They were all just waiting for an answer. But even Daniel himself didn't know what to do and reply. He just sat there for 20 minutes and the awkward silence still kept on.

Bernice could not take the silence any longer when she broke the silence.

Bernice: Since you can't come to a conclusion. I will counter propose the solution for the best of all the ladies here.

She did a headcount.

Herself. Rena. Evans. Gin. 4 in total with 2 minis.

She said without thinking: You have a total of 6 rooms here in this apartment. Each will take their individual rooms. The other two rooms; one will be set as the children's play room. You ARE to go and dress up the room. You ARE to decorate each of the rooms suited to the each of us. You ARE to pay for all the renovations that is necessary. There will be no BUTs from you. Do as you are told. They will be living here until you make a decision. But I have to tell you that if any of us find a suitable partner, we will leave as and when we want without reporting everything to you. Is that clear to you?

Daniel nodded. Bernice was always the one with solutions to every single thing. What would he do without her? But what should he do with the multiple ladies here. It would mean his freedom gone. But what freedom would he have now that his two minis is here?

Before he could even react. Bernice declared: Since we are living here together. Let me make this clear. You are to take shifts to take care of the child. You will have two maids hired here to help out. Salary wise would be controlled by me. I will divide up the portions equally so you do not fool around. With that, I will allocate the job scope around to the strengths of us so things are fair and just. Are you clear on this?

Daniel nodded.

The others nodded.

Bernice: Leave us Daniel for now. Let me settle the things with the ladies here. Go and grab some food for us. Sliced fish soup with spinach for Evans and Rena, fried fish soup with bee hoon for me and the lady beside you. Go.

He did so obediently. And then he counted his money salary divided by the group of ladies. He nearly wanted to kill himself.

*Sharks, no more drinks, no more spending.*

He just just got a new car since the accident. He drove off and cried. The agony that his money was not his anymore.

The queue was darn long and it took him nearly an hour to get his food. But by he was already so hungry.

He drove carefully home and saw that they were already happily nestled in their own rooms. When they heard the sound of him opening the doors, they stood outside their respective rooms, smiling happily at him. Bernice was the one who was just next door to him.

They listened to Bernice despite the age difference. Rena was too. She wasn't particular about who the boss is but more that she could spend time with Dan and her child.

they sat down together in the dining hall and slurped their food hungrily. Evans excused herself as she passed Bernice a slip of paper. She had to go to her room to breastfeed Delphine. Rena was more relaxed as she wasn't breastfeeding. She was too lazy for that. She only go on formula milk.

It was an easy meal when Gin offered to clean the tables.

Bernice: Daniel, you will go with me to the maid agency tomorrow. And then this is the lists of things they would like in their room. We will also see some interior designers tomorrow for it. Now. Pass me your bank book, credit cards, atm cards and all.

Daniel read the list:
Bernice interior: None.

Rena: A five star hotel room with a jacuuzi bathtub, a massage chair, built in wardrobe, wine cellar, Philippe Starck Mirror, a L shaped table for work and a King size waterbed.

Evans: treadmill in the room, clean and minimalist with build-in wardrobe, bathtub with built-in tv in the shower room. A Bose Lifestyle Surround system.

Gin: Marshmallow themed room with no sharp corners at all. Looking organic and fun. Stools and tables are to be mushroom shaped. A huge round bed like a gigantic marshmallow, and everything that fits into it.

He nearly wanted to commit suicide. And his thoughts were "Bernice treats me best."

Bernice: Don't be too happy yet. I just can't think of any now. So you will write me a cheque equivalent to the amount you spend on each room. Also don't forget about the playroom. I also think since there is a spare room, we should renovate it to suit the random themes you have and make it a guest room. Well you never know whose room would that be right. Her eyes were shining bright red, staring at Daniel.

Daniel: No... no.. no more.

Now his heart bled knowing that the 'damages' will reduce his saving by at least half or more.

Despite the random themes in his house, things were starting to look good. The interiors I mean.

Months passed and he soon adapted to the life with his so called lovers. Allison dropped by sometimes to say hello. Of course he had no time to go for drinks and stuff anymore. His friend heard about his 'earth shattering news' and all texted: Wow good life huh? So many girls at your fingertips? So envious of you.

He always replied: You want to switch and see?

None replied his amswer.

But living together did have its perks. Though he doesn't get a chance to see how much his bank account was left with and surviving on minimal pocket money, he doesn;t have some unforgettable nights on special seasons, just like his birthday where he will get no threesomes but foursomes. But of course, he was totally drained like a dried banana. The ladies would just laugh at him and cuddled together with the maids tending to their babies.

Yes, Daniel did get thinner. He worked hard now to try to earn more. Rena was still working as per her bossy self at work, and she helped in the expenses at home too.

It was a weekend when he finally gets a rest day and he just laid on the sofa, glad that everything is settling well when the doorbell rang.

He dragged himself to open the door when suddenly someone jumped in and hugged him, causing him to fall to the ground with breasts burying his face so much that he was almost out of air.

Ting: 我回来了！想我吗？？？？？？ (I'm backk!!!!! Do you miss me????)

Four heads popped out of their respective rooms and Ting looked at them.

Ting: 哇怎么这么多人啊？ (Oh my. There's so many people)

She spotted Bernice and Evans and waved happily at them as she walked in without asking.

Daniel slammed his hand on his forehead.

*No..not the 6th room*

Bernice and Evans welcomed Ting and showed her to her room.

Daniel could only watch as his face turned pale. Rena and Gin put their hands on their waists, ready to charge at him anytime now.

Daniel: Dears, I can explain.

A sweet duo slaps came landing on each side of his face. It was so hard it felt like burning. Bernice and Evans told Ting about what happened and before Daniel could react, a kick came in between his legs.

Ting: You idiot! Hmmph!

Daniel's eyes nearly turned white.

*From the cast and characters of "The Day you walked away", we wish you a very happy new year filled with new horizons and returns. And may all the great things happen to you and your loved ones!*

Daniel tried his best to stand and wave but the pain was too excruciating to bear. The five ladies was laughing at Daniel and they high five each other.

Ting: 看你以后还敢不敢！ (See if you dare womanize again)

Happy New Year!
__________________________________________________

Nominate your favorite writer:
http://sammyboy.online/showthread.php?t=331480

Coffee's Recommended Reads:

Erased Memories
If you could erase memories, would you?
http://sammyboy.online/showthread.php?t=320941

你问我为什么开始喝酒，而且每次都喝醉
Right here waiting.
http://sammyboy.online/showthread.php?t=321606

A Long Awaited Affinity
Do you believe in Fate?
http://sammyboy.online/showthread.php?t=319312

Days with Jean
Sequel to What are words. The story of Jean.
http://sammyboy.online/showthread.php?t=313013

.................................................. ......................................

Love, Can I?
我的天空
http://sammyboy.online/showthread.php?t=323953

Queen of the Ring
Winner takes all.
http://sammyboy.online/showthread.php?t=323203

The Promise
What would you do?
http://sammyboy.online/showthread.php?t=317932

Spitting Tales
Adventures of Little Max.
http://sammyboy.online/showthread.php?t=317499

Steamy Windows.
Aromatically erotic.
http://sammyboy.online/showthread.php?t=313807

What are words.
Love hurts. Sacrifices only for the sake of love.
http://sammyboy.online/showthread.php?t=310476

The Floral Top.
An unexpected sexual awakening.
http://sammyboy.online/showthread.php?t=302329

FishyLynn · #**198** 31-12-2012, 05:05 PM

Karma... haha..

wolf2305 · #**199** 31-12-2012, 06:08 PM

great story !!

Meow^^ · #**200** 31-12-2012, 08:04 PM

Thanks again for another great story and I wishes you a happy new year cheers

Coffeecans · #**201** 31-12-2012, 08:07 PM

Happy new year to all sis, bros, and the inbetweens as well!

There will be another non-fiction in the making.

BMW69 · #**202** 31-12-2012, 08:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Coffeecans

Happy new year to all sis, bros, and the inbetweens as well!

There will be another non-fiction in the making.

With a younger theme this time perhaps? Haha since I can't write anymore, I can only suggest

Coffeecans · #**203** 31-12-2012, 08:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BMW69

With a younger theme this time perhaps? Haha since I can't write anymore, I can only suggest

wow that is not easy hahahha... considering I passed that era quite some time ago already heehee.. during my era not so 'happening' as now wo heehee

Me Siam Bu · #**204** 31-12-2012, 08:36 PM

ha ha nice nice story

Poobor · #**205** 31-12-2012, 10:38 PM

Thanks Ts for your entertaining story, I like it very much as the content is well delivered. Keeping the story fun n unexpected unlike draggy type as I personally prefer short story.

The day you walk away refreshed the memories that I had encounter months back but not as bad as walking away on wedding day. Kudos.

BMW69 · #**206** 01-01-2013, 12:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Coffeecans

wow that is not easy hahahha... considering I passed that era quite some time ago already heehee.. during my era not so 'happening' as now wo heehee

Hahaha bro if Daniel can have 5 girls in his stable and 2 kids, I don't see what's so hard about writing on younger people. As long as you pen it, it will be good

happy new year!