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Re: Life as a Limo Driver
Where has TS gone...missing his story
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Re: Life as a Limo Driver
Helen started to take leave very often and was always stay at home with me. I try to talk to her asking her not to take leave often. But she just won't listen. With her contract ending in six months time , this is not the kind of exit she should make even thg she doesn't have any intention of continuing in this line of work.
Helen " I am starting my no pay leave next week " Me " no pay leave ? Are you going overseas for long holiday ? " H " no ! " Me " are you unwell ? " H " no " Me " we talk abt this after dinner , let's finished up " Helen stood up suddenly from the dinning table and went to the sofa . I called for the maid. Me " we are done , get us some hot Chinese tea pls " Even the domestic helpers could sense that a storm is coming soon , just by looking at our body expression. The arrived at the coffee table. Me " that would be all, go have your dinner and retried for the night" The maid quickly took her leave after she stole a glance at Helen face. Me " so what happen at work baby ? " H " nothing " She continue to stare into the TV set. Me " u stress at work ? " Helen " I told u I want to quit and break my bond , u discouraged me to do so what ! " I keep silent . Helen started to cry. I gave her a tissue and pass her a cup of hot tea to calm her down. After she calm down I asked further .... Me " is this abt me or you ?" Helen " a bit of both " She went on .... H " I can't loose u Charles , after u got into the accident I sat down to think and I got worried" Me " baby is just an accident " I promise u no more bikes " H " is not that , I want to be around u Charles , I don't want to fly anymore." Me " u don't work then what u want to do " Helen " Charles , I don't need to work. In fact u need not work too. U don't have to worry I can support u. U don't have to worry what ppl say ! " I took a sip of the tea and was deep In thg . Me " ok baby since u not happy . Tomorrow u go back office and cancel your no pay leave and submit your resignation letter. Helen Jump over to myself and hug me . Kissing me all over my face, |
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*applause.. the master is back.. thanks for the update..
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Welcome back! More updates please..
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Welcome back tigerwoody74!
Its been a while, hope all has been good. Looking forward to the rest of your sexventures Cheers Badboy |
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TS sure have plan B |
#2362
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u are back!!
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#2363
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Hello bro Tiger U have recovered. Nice to be back. Keep going my frens
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Bro, camping here awaiting for more of your updates.
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Bro, this is an awesome story. You should publish a book. Cheers
Regards, DINNY (Penang Boy) |
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Always a pleasure reading...
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I just spent the whole afternoon and evening reading everything, from pg 1-158. U got me hooked from the start with your stories. Keep it up and i hope u are recovering well
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Re: Life as a Limo Driver
Wonderful story. Your descriptions and dialogue are compelling.
I also think many of us on this thread find it a joy to be able to personally relate to the multiple places/characters you write about. Few other literature allows them. As others have mentioned, the story seems very exciting/sexciting but it is not impossible. So it helps us to dream in an otherwise boring day-to-day life. If you were to publish it as a book, my suggestion would be to self-publish (dun think traditional publishers would be open to your story/content) and in a novella/light novel format. Getting an editor would also be important, to help regulate the flow of the story and fill in some gaps in storyline. If you're worried about confidentiality, I would suggest you wait a number of years (5,10?) after you retire as a limo driver, then self-publish the book with fake names and dates. If your book ever comes out, I would support. Take care of your health and keep up the good work |
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Looking forward to more updates from ts.
Thanks for sharing, very nice read |
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definitely TS is one of the longer writing short stories around.
others usually drop out after 20/30pages. TS 159 and going! great!
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