I was Naive (Story)

[Starter]

Originally Posted by ravendanish

I don't have the points to up you but u have my support....don't stop....

Dear Brothers, These points mean nothing to me, What can they be used for anyway I do not know. I am just greatly affected by these ppl whom are not appreciating the hours I spent on this and why can't they do things they want on PM?

I hereby openly challenge Taisho75 in providing the thread and Leo_guy to explain his intention of not using a PM and openly request for a link to be placed on my thread.

For A Writer's work to be deemed as plagiarism, is by far the most insulting remark I believe any writer can receive.

[babyboy33]

bro Starter

just ignore those ppl comment.... those ppl have nothing to do beside criticize other's work....if ask them write story...sure keep quiet one...

was enjoying yr story....plz continue

[PeeAgent007]

Originally Posted by Starter

Dear Brothers, These point mean nothing to me, What can they be used for anyway I do not know. I am just greatly affected by these ppl whom are not appreciating the hours I spent on this and why can't they do things they want on PM?

Please do continue bro starter , have always been refreshing this thread every hour or so every day (obviously not at night) to see whether there is new updates ! Since i started reading i cant stop ! Dont worry about the others , will continue to support you !

[PeeAgent007]

Please continue bro starter ! Really like your story !

[xAhKingx]

Bro. You have my support. Please carry on with the good work.

[shinozuke]

Originally Posted by Starter

Dear Brothers, These points mean nothing to me, What can they be used for anyway I do not know. I am just greatly affected by these ppl whom are not appreciating the hours I spent on this and why can't they do things they want on PM?

I hereby openly challenge Taisho75 in providing the thread and Leo_guy to explain his intention of not using a PM and openly request for a link to be placed on my thread.

For A Writer's work to be deemed as plagiarism, is by far the most insulting remark I believe any writer can receive.

Bro, I understand how you feel. Especially when something that you put your time and soul into it and to find it unappreciated and insulted. But, always keep this in mind, haters will always hate.

Think it of a good way. Your masterpiece is so good that those fuckers bother to come and post these nonsensical and insulting comments. You had garnered so much attention that it causes people's jealousy. You ought to be proud of that!

Just because of one fucker, you indirectly caused disappointment from a lot of supportive readers. Not worth it.

So do continue. Your stories remind of the past that I have been through.

For the reader that say can find the link some where, let him post the links. Challenge him! I am sure he can produce shit.

Don't let these kids affect you. Be mindful that now is the school holidays. Kids are all over the place. So please don't be affected. Looking forward towards your next installment. Cheers!!!

[GrieGzEters]

Bro Starter, pls dun stop your story!! I dun care if it's true or fake or you take it from somewhere else, all I know is I am enjoying what I am reading from you.
Think about it, there are more people here enjoying your story than the ones who criticise it.

[Lennyberg]

Originally Posted by Starter

Dear Brothers, These points mean nothing to me, What can they be used for anyway I do not know. I am just greatly affected by these ppl whom are not appreciating the hours I spent on this and why can't they do things they want on PM?

I hereby openly challenge Taisho75 in providing the thread and Leo_guy to explain his intention of not using a PM and openly request for a link to be placed on my thread.

For A Writer's work to be deemed as plagiarism, is by far the most insulting remark I believe any writer can receive.

I totally understand how you feel! please do not be discourage by these spoilers. points honestly means nothing, it cant be changed to vouchers or cash equivalents anyways. for me these points are for encouragement!

Please continue the story! DO NOT STOP! as i have mentioned earlier, it really reminds me of those days...

[yellowbro]

Originally Posted by Starter

Please find and paste the link!!! Great lord this is that kind of respect that you guys offer for someone that writes for you reading pleasure

For the brother or sisters (if any) that have supported me I deeply regret that I am in consideration of stopping my fingers as I have felt utter disappointment I writing this story especially when the time devoted is not being appreciated.

Apologises.

Starter.

Bro, u got a great story here n I truly enjoyed it as ur story allow me to relive my sec sch days in my mind! Don't be disheartened pls!

[Starter]

Originally Posted by Lennyberg

I totally understand how you feel! please do not be discourage by these spoilers. points honestly means nothing, it cant be changed to vouchers or cash equivalents anyways. for me these points are for encouragement!

Please continue the story! DO NOT STOP! as i have mentioned earlier, it really reminds me of those days...

Originally Posted by yellowbro

Bro, u got a great story here n I truly enjoyed it as ur story allow me to relive my sec sch days in my mind! Don't be disheartened pls!

ok, end of these nonsense, I start to see ppl from my era. whom I believe can relate more to it, Ok Guys I shall Write on and Sorry for the nonsensical behaviour.

[silver5surfer]

Originally Posted by Starter

ok, end of these nonsense, I start to see ppl from my era. whom I believe can relate more to it, Ok Guys I shall Write on and Sorry for the nonsensical behaviour.

You have my full support!

[Lennyberg]

Originally Posted by Starter

ok, end of these nonsense, I start to see ppl from my era. whom I believe can relate more to it, Ok Guys I shall Write on and Sorry for the nonsensical behaviour.

full SARPORK! Go Go Go!

[Starter]

For those that have never attempted to skip school and wish to remain at your home, it was a chore. I woke up the next day knowing that I was supposed meeting Jasmine and Ann at my home, but as my parent normally left for work later than me. I had to change into my School uniform and "go to School" at the usual timing. after leaving the house I went to the opposite blk and camped wait for my parents to be out of the house before returning. Of Course it was safer to wait for another 15mins after they left so you can be sure they did not return as they may have forgotten something. And that was what I did that day.

I return to my home at around 8am, and shortly after someone knocked on my door it was Jasmine and Ann. I opened my door and let them in, and it was surprising for me that they bought Macdonalds breakfast (during my time Macdonalds Breakfast meant your pocket money for that day or two) for me.

Jasmine: Nah, Eat first ( Jasmine passing me the breakfast)

I placed the paperbag on the table.

Me: Why you change so fast?

Jasmine: Change?

Me: Yah lor, yesterday I heard someone leave voicemail ah, She cry wor.

Ann was laughing softly behind Jasmine.

Jasmine: I don't think so, I don't remember.

Me: Heng, (Lucky) I haven't delete my message. you want to hear?

Jasmine blushed as Ann held her on the shoulder.

I took the cordless phone and pulled Ann to me

Me: Eh Ann come, I let you hear.

Ann nodded and smiled as Jasmine tried to take the cordless phone from me, She rubbed on my ribs and there was some pain.

Me Ouch.... (holding my ribs)

Jasmine: Pain ah, told you to have your breakfast. Talk so much.

Ann took the paperbag and arrange the breakfast nicely on the table.

Ann: Lawrence, come and eat.

I went on and enjoyed the breakfast that the girl brought me as the were munching on muffins they bought for themselves.

Ann was very attentive and will pass me tissues when I have things on my mouth while Jasmine will always be criticising that I ate like a pig.

Me: yah lah, Jasmine you high class hor.

Jasmine: it's not that, it's just who would eat and drop food like that.

Me: Someone you cry for lor

Jasmine: I sent the wrong message.

Me: oh you know another Lawrence lah.

Jasmine: why not?

Me: also true but I remember you should give me a voicemail on something yesterday hor.

Jasmine: We talk later, Let's finish breakfast.

[Amora]

Originally Posted by Lennyberg

full SARPORK! Go Go Go!

Same here

[Mafan]

Dont bother with those idiots. Just cont UR story no matter true or not. At least u put in the effort.