I was Naive (Story)

[Starter]

sorry for the late lunch lolz

[blur185]

Yes la... joanne!

[98188729]

Originally Posted by Starter

giving full service la tao yan....

Steady bro. How you know this one my type?

[Starter]

Originally Posted by blur185

Yes la... joanne!

u really like Joanne so...... much....

[pubor76]

TS Bro,

Superb story, due to the locale (Bishan) & the places you've gone to.. we might probably be schoolmates (or I could be older and already part of the alumni during your time). Everything you said brought back memories of my sec school, and its neighbourhood.

The Pai kia part feels real to me as I could relate my old brushes with some paikias. (but I could not relate to having 5 girls (at the same time somemore!), so you were one lucky bastard eh...!! )

Cheers and keep your updates coming!

Cheers,
Pubor

[Starter]

Originally Posted by pubor76

TS Bro,

Superb story, due to the locale (Bishan) & the places you've gone to.. we might probably be schoolmates (or I could be older and already part of the alumni during your time). Everything you said brought back memories of my sec school, and its neighbourhood.

The Pai kia part feels real to me as I could relate my old brushes with some paikias. (but I could not relate to having 5 girls (at the same time somemore!), so you were one lucky bastard eh...!! )

Cheers and keep your updates coming!

Cheers,
Pubor

your nick really made my day. give me a pm maybe I do know u and we can talk more

[Jackhammer03]

Have been refreshing this page waiting for updates!! Nicely written sir!

[Kabari]

Faster update !! Camping!!

[Starter]

If you guys are expecting a second round of steamy sex, I am sorry. we woke up the next morning to the banging sound of the door, Joanne took nothing of it and carried on sleeping. That is until we hear: Joanne! Sir come home! Joanne! Sir come home!, now that really made us jump, and seriously regret not wearing back our clothes the night before. We behaved like an adulterous couple with the wife/husband at the door, scrambling for our clothes and putting them on. ( this was something we joke of after many years, we call it adultery training) Joanne asked if I was done, and I answered her ok ok.

Joanne opened the door and went down stairs, after which She from the living room she shouted out: Auntie where is Dad? (it was later known to me that Auntie was trying to tell us that Joanne's Dad was coming back, Kudos to indo maids)

Knowing that her Dad was not back yet, Joanne asked me to leave. I followed them out to the gate but it's too late, a white Mercedes Benz was at the gate and it was Joanne's Dad.

Joanne's Dad was very different from Jasmine's and Ann's he was older and a stern man, he got out of his car and he just scanned at me before asking Joanne to go over. after talking to Joanne, her father came to me. Asking me if my parents knew I was here and I nodded. He asked me to join them for breakfast and I looked at Joanne, She was looking at me and I could not make out what she was trying to tell me with her shifty facial signals.

I agreed and I could see her slapping her palm on her face, I knew I make the wrong choice. Joanne's Dad drove us to a nearby coffeeshop (those old school shop house kind) where we had breakfast, nothing fantastic just toast and eggs. But that was the worst breakfast I had, It was not about the food, Joanne's Dad Starts asking me things like how long I have known Joanne, What I aspire to be? and whom was my inspiration in life? ( Hello?? I am only 13 then) I answered all his question with silence looking blankly at him. he did not pursue much farther and told me I should think about it. I nodded just to satisfied him and soon I told them I needed to go home.

Her father thanked me for keeping Joanne company, and I told him it's ok. he offer to send me back but I declined thinking of what other funny question that he would ask me. I said goodbye to them and walked towards the bus stop, what a morning that was.

[naked123]

you still keep in contact with the girls?

anddddd

is one of them your wife?

[Kabari]

omg how old are u now

[banger_boy]

Keep it up bro.

[Starter]

Originally Posted by banger_boy

Keep it up bro.

Pushing myself bro, sometimes just feel abit tired and want close the story, but seeing guys that are so into it makes me go on and on and on

[blur185]

Oh he thanked the wrong person for keeping company with his daughter... you did more than what company should mean by her dad's definition of company! You dog you! Keep it coming bro, cheers!

[banger_boy]

Understood bro. But really we are not like you who can narrate it so vividly. Appreciate your writing. perhaps you could do an update every 6 to 8 hours and pace yourself. It will fall into a pattern and samsters here will understand ( i assume).

Can still feel the energy in the story simmering and the tension is still good.

You can also see that i seldom comment on stories. and most of it is here.

I believe readers here of that era are also reminiscing about it and hence the continual updates.

Be it fantasy or true events, i considered you a master in writing.

I am also like readers here savouring every update. it has become like a drug in our daily life.

Last but not least, banger_boy and his caravan of motor-seow will be at your disposal should any keyboard warriors decided to do any flaming.