Confessions of a Assistant Wedding Photographer

[damong777]

TS...keep it up

[mark1983]

wah! camping! nice!!!

[PassingbyJ]

Camping here.

[BMW69]

Originally Posted by papagraphite

He's flash forwarding. The first few chapters were more like a flashback/prelude/backstory to his adventures on the yatch. Could say it's written almost like it was ready for screenplay but I guess some of the seniors here prefer a chronological order

That does make sense.

TS, in that case, may I humbly suggest that you italicize flashbacks or flashforwards in future to avoid anymore misunderstanding? It's just a suggestion though.

[S|B3HSI@N]

Nice story... keep up the good work bro. Waiting for your next chapter so as to upz u...

[fishhunterii]

Thank you Bros who supported the story.

I see a few comments now, some got the idea/style I'm writing and some got confused.
Yes, I'm writing like a movie script way, a pre-lead up, then changing scene with a transition

‘Click+flash, click+flash, click+flash’ it was blinding my eyes ………………….
[then it leads to the next scene
…………….. I closed my eyes and rubbed it. Opened my eyes I saw Yvonne in her gold bikini. Posing right in front of my door, “hey you are up early

Maybe it's easier done on screen than in writing and it needs more description I guess.

I'm writing on the fly, as I type the story immediately I post but since there are some that got lost or terminology not suitable. I will think and plan better but will take a bit of time to complete. If I do on the fly again maybe more bros will be confused.

I thank the bros who got my direction of the story, for those who got my style, I will still be writing on the fly but you have the privilege of me sending the story straight off my macbook to your inbox. (My mind works faster on the fly than pre-planned story lines)

For the rest, thank you for your patience and the story will continue soon after some restructures.

[pussywillow]

Its ok bro, I think you are doing just fine, post on the fly lah.

[Deslyf]

Nice and really project your feeling and the touchs which you encounter

[Iluminati]

Originally Posted by fishhunterii

I thank the bros who got my direction of the story, for those who got my style, I will still be writing on the fly but you have the privilege of me sending the story straight off my macbook to your inbox. (My mind works faster on the fly than pre-planned story lines)

Bro fishhunterii, I understand the direction of your story!
You can add me to your inbox lists yeah!

[biantaidashi]

Support support! Love your story!

[ConnerDoReMe]

Post some of ur works..let us drool leh!

[yohooo]

wah... this is a really nice read... lots of vivid description... making me feel the TS... update fast!

[montroy]

nice story. u should not bother with those who got lost in transit. upp for u later

[montroy]

Originally Posted by MrStyleKing

you mean for the rest of us who got lost reading TS's story, TS should not bother??

i dont think that many ppl got lost. i understood the plot and purpose of his writing and did other samsters. so why he needs to change

[SparkyB]

Marvelous story so far... Keep it up